Demon:The Beginning

Ok...New Story. Actually, I will be making everything back from the beginning, dont delete this topic, find another one in PAGE 2 and delete it, im making this game back from the beginning!!!

STORY

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Year - 129
Planet Earth
[Demon World] - In Demon World, a new demon was about to be created. Demons are not brought to this world by birth, they are created by Demon Elders. but as every other place, demon world had laws... because DEMONS, when created, were too powerful, the Gods made decisions, to stop Demon Elders from creating Demons the way like they did until now. The Gods made a law that Demons must be born trough Humans. the law was accepted by all gods and at the end the Demon God couldn't make any difference. in the time when this law was brought, the Demon elders started creating a new DEMON... each
elder gave him powers, this Demon was supposed to be one of the strongest demons ever created. But after the creation, the Gods needed to take the demon and put him in a Human body. but for this to be done they needed to make it so the demon is not born in his normal form... they were supposed to make him be born to look like a human, and for the gods this was the first time doing a difficult task like this and it was a long process. When they put the demon in a human body.it was already the Year 1997 on planet Earth.
the child was born in year 1998.

Characters

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ONLY ONE:
[FAKE]Human Name:Jack Rivera
[REAL]Demon Name:Raijin
Age:12 (He gets older as the game proceeds. his look will change too)

Bio:
A normal kid like everyone else. He had good parents
and everything he ever wanted. his first 12 years were very good, a kid like him couldn't wish better then this that he already had. But from now on...his life will change big time!

He Looks Like this:

Features [For Now]

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-Advanced Message System
-Upgraded Battle System
-Good/Evil System (make your own decision...be good or evil trough the game)
more to come...

Screenshots

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Title:

more to come...

Tell me what you all think, and maybe if someone or something should be changed in the story...

the title pic kicks ass! i've seen the character before, he's made with character maker, right?

yes... and I've edited it with photoshop cs2

So, you releasing a demo anytime soon?

meh..no. As you can see, i've started from the beginning, so i still need to make maps, i haven't made any map yet...

MODERATOR EDIT: I've corrected the english in your first post, if you don't like this, i'll change it back to the way it was, if you do like it, i'll change the other posts too if you want, okay?

Okay change them...i know im not perfect in english

that's okay, i'm glad to help